Brief Script For Blood Bath
Ava, Isabella and Isla. Nicole and Chloe have been bitten by a vampire and so becoming undead, Kirsty is still human. Out of loyalty to her sisters she seeks out victims and lures them back to their lair, providing a source of blood to keep her sisters nourished. As she is the only one able to go out in the sunlight, she is getting disillusioned. The story begins when she attracts a man and reluctantly still feels she should bring him back to her sisters.
Scene One - Introductory shot, shot reverse shot introducing two main characters, Kirsty and Sam(?).
Sam - "Ethan".
Kirsty - "Ava"
Scene Two- Snuggled up going down the stairs.
Scene Three-Door scene, Kirsty is inside with the door slightly open, unable to see between it. Sam outside.
Sam - "Wiill you let me in?"
Kirsty (from inside)- "No I cant"
Sam turns to walk away, then someone grabs Sams hand from inside and pulls him in.
Voice over - "Don't worry you'll be safe"
Scene Four- Close up of lips - smoking
Scene Five- Gross bits. (flashing images of biting etc)
Scene Six- Over shoulder shot of the two sisters.
Chloe -"Hi, I'm Isabella "
Nicole -"Hi, I'm Isla"
Scene Seven- Slight low angle mid shot. Three framed shot. Provocative body language. Glass of Wine. At a table.
Flashing shots of blood dripping from mouth.
Scene Eight- Girl in short white top running down the stairs.
Blood stained clothes being picked up by Kirsty
Then a close up of a Kirsty leaving, with sisters and Sam in the background.
Voice over - "It's not their world, it's our world".
"it's our world" - shot goes back to one of the sisters saying this.
Scene Nice- A series of shot flashing images of torture, blood and biting.
Scene Ten- Kirsty walking down street looking for another male victim. Finds a guy.
Random guy -"Can I buy you a drink?"
Kirsty smiles.
approximately twenty fast paced shots of more biting, blood, bath and screams with a voice over saying "My world belongs to you now"
Title -Blood Bath
Tagline- Even the undead have a thirst for life.
Scene One - Introductory shot, shot reverse shot introducing two main characters, Kirsty and Sam(?).
Sam - "Ethan".
Kirsty - "Ava"
Scene Two- Snuggled up going down the stairs.
Scene Three-Door scene, Kirsty is inside with the door slightly open, unable to see between it. Sam outside.
Sam - "Wiill you let me in?"
Kirsty (from inside)- "No I cant"
Sam turns to walk away, then someone grabs Sams hand from inside and pulls him in.
Voice over - "Don't worry you'll be safe"
Scene Four- Close up of lips - smoking
Scene Five- Gross bits. (flashing images of biting etc)
Scene Six- Over shoulder shot of the two sisters.
Chloe -"Hi, I'm Isabella "
Nicole -"Hi, I'm Isla"
Scene Seven- Slight low angle mid shot. Three framed shot. Provocative body language. Glass of Wine. At a table.
Flashing shots of blood dripping from mouth.
Scene Eight- Girl in short white top running down the stairs.
Blood stained clothes being picked up by Kirsty
Then a close up of a Kirsty leaving, with sisters and Sam in the background.
Voice over - "It's not their world, it's our world".
"it's our world" - shot goes back to one of the sisters saying this.
Scene Nice- A series of shot flashing images of torture, blood and biting.
Scene Ten- Kirsty walking down street looking for another male victim. Finds a guy.
Random guy -"Can I buy you a drink?"
Kirsty smiles.
approximately twenty fast paced shots of more biting, blood, bath and screams with a voice over saying "My world belongs to you now"
Title -Blood Bath
Tagline- Even the undead have a thirst for life.
Developed Script
A slight high angle of a candle flickering to suggests the seductive indications of the vampires also the candle is also red to suggests the mysterious and sensual feeling for the trailer.
We are then introduced to one of the characters (Kirsty) leaving provocatively against the wall waiting for a male victim.
During this clip there is a voice over - 'Stay unseen in the shadows'
Next, is a short clip of one of our vampires breaking a males neck, this indicates that our villains are highly malicious.
Quickly after is a gate shot where it opens ever so slighting with a high intensive creaking diegetic sound effect.
Then we are shown a tracking shot of which we assume is a vampire eating a multiple amount of males.
We are then taken back to Kirsty who is taking one of our victims down the stairs to our 'lair'
After we see a shot of a women about to bite a males neck
We are then shown an extreme close up of a pair of lips smoking to suggests rebellious nature.
Back to a mid shot of neck biting
Then it is a high angle shot of a vampire crawling up the stairs to add to its abnormality
We then have a close up of a vampires face licking a knife covered in blood to highlight the dangerous personality.
A quick shot of the vampire covering a victims mouth
A diagonal shot of another vampire skipping down the hallway
An un-focused shot of a vampire showing her fangs.
Another high angle shot of the vampire licking blood of the other vampires arm
It then consists of three fast paced shot 1) Mid shot of vampire in bath 2) Male victim struggling in pain -Mid shot 3) Extreme close up of a mouth with blood pouring out of it,
Another shot of the vampire grabbing the chair -Mid shot.
2 similar shots of the vampire with her fangs and blood
Multiple shots of vampires in bath with blood etc
Voice overs
- 'I stay unseen in the shadows'
-'I feel them powerless beneath me'
-'Thirst for blood'
-'The undead is reborn'
-'Lead them, tempt them, till they have nothing left'
We are then introduced to one of the characters (Kirsty) leaving provocatively against the wall waiting for a male victim.
During this clip there is a voice over - 'Stay unseen in the shadows'
Next, is a short clip of one of our vampires breaking a males neck, this indicates that our villains are highly malicious.
Quickly after is a gate shot where it opens ever so slighting with a high intensive creaking diegetic sound effect.
Then we are shown a tracking shot of which we assume is a vampire eating a multiple amount of males.
We are then taken back to Kirsty who is taking one of our victims down the stairs to our 'lair'
After we see a shot of a women about to bite a males neck
We are then shown an extreme close up of a pair of lips smoking to suggests rebellious nature.
Back to a mid shot of neck biting
Then it is a high angle shot of a vampire crawling up the stairs to add to its abnormality
We then have a close up of a vampires face licking a knife covered in blood to highlight the dangerous personality.
A quick shot of the vampire covering a victims mouth
A diagonal shot of another vampire skipping down the hallway
An un-focused shot of a vampire showing her fangs.
Another high angle shot of the vampire licking blood of the other vampires arm
It then consists of three fast paced shot 1) Mid shot of vampire in bath 2) Male victim struggling in pain -Mid shot 3) Extreme close up of a mouth with blood pouring out of it,
Another shot of the vampire grabbing the chair -Mid shot.
2 similar shots of the vampire with her fangs and blood
Multiple shots of vampires in bath with blood etc
Voice overs
- 'I stay unseen in the shadows'
-'I feel them powerless beneath me'
-'Thirst for blood'
-'The undead is reborn'
-'Lead them, tempt them, till they have nothing left'
By Nicole Russell