This pitch was thought out by Chloe Young and was further developed with Nicole Russell
Ideal Pitch;
Young girl of the age of 16 gives birth to a baby, the girl is reluctant to keep it and therefore gives it up for adoption. She is having general life problems with her family who refused to be at the birth and her boyfriend who broke up with her.
The mother is now of an age of 30 and starts hearing and seeing sudden movements and darkened shadows. It's not long before she starts hearing an emerged whisper 'A small mistake is important not to make'... As she tells her friends and family she is being deeply disturbed, she gets put in a home for further examining.
She soon finds out that the eerie presence is her daughter, who was brutally murdered by her adoptive parents. Her daughter seeks revenge on her mother and wishes to kill her in the same way..
The mother ends up having a graphic death by her daughter, and the police, family and friends who refused to believe her come to the daughters attention, ready to make a sequel.
Young girl of the age of 16 gives birth to a baby, the girl is reluctant to keep it and therefore gives it up for adoption. She is having general life problems with her family who refused to be at the birth and her boyfriend who broke up with her.
The mother is now of an age of 30 and starts hearing and seeing sudden movements and darkened shadows. It's not long before she starts hearing an emerged whisper 'A small mistake is important not to make'... As she tells her friends and family she is being deeply disturbed, she gets put in a home for further examining.
She soon finds out that the eerie presence is her daughter, who was brutally murdered by her adoptive parents. Her daughter seeks revenge on her mother and wishes to kill her in the same way..
The mother ends up having a graphic death by her daughter, and the police, family and friends who refused to believe her come to the daughters attention, ready to make a sequel.
Paragraphs by Chloe Young